Tuesday, 29 November 2011
Tuesday, 22 November 2011
report
the script uses less dialogue because it is easier and it doesn't waste time. the script uses more stage direction to make the video interesting. the script uses even more stage direction.
Tuesday, 8 November 2011
- What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname?
- my characters name is Kobe Bryant
- How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?
- he is 15
- What is their date of birth?
- 4/4/1996
- What is their place of birth?
- Somalia ,bardhere
- Are they male or female?
- male
- Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?
- the person is dead but he comes back as a ghost
- Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many?
- no
- What is your character's overall health like?
- he's healthy but he died of a gunshot and he comes back as a ghost
- What type of personality does your character have?
- good humor
- What is their Ethnic background and religion?
- Islam and was in the horn of africa
- What is their current occupation?
- he is doesn't have a job he was a kid
- What level of education does your character have?
- he died as younger
- What does your character like or love?
- football
- What does your character dislike or hate?
- people who dont like him
Friday, 4 November 2011
structure of my ducomentry
Beginning
Its starts with statistics and people playing football . will film the area which people play and we will talk over it.
middle
we will interview teens who play in the streets with their friends. we will also film them playing football.
we will also ask teens if their dreams are still alive or if they have giving up.
End
we will end with statistics and the sun going down and rhetorical question which will be " will these streets create the future stars?"
Its starts with statistics and people playing football . will film the area which people play and we will talk over it.
middle
we will interview teens who play in the streets with their friends. we will also film them playing football.
we will also ask teens if their dreams are still alive or if they have giving up.
End
we will end with statistics and the sun going down and rhetorical question which will be " will these streets create the future stars?"
Tuesday, 1 November 2011
1. EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH. NIGHT
a kid playing football at night on his own in a big empty pitch
2. EXT. FOOTBALL PITCH /. SIDELINES .
whilst the boy is playing football he gets spotted by a man and then the man watches on.
3.EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH .
the man walks toward the kid and the kid doesnt spot him and he carries on playing.
4. EXT. FOOTBALL PITCH.
the man approaches the kid and they start talking to each other.
5. EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH.
the man agree to play a penalty shootout .
6. EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH
the boy takes the first shot and he scores but the man misses and the ball goes through the kid.
7.EXT .FOOTBALL PITCH.
the man gets shocked before the man says anything the kid disappears.
A boy who died in a football pitch years ago come backs to play every night, so one night he comes back to play and do football skills,but this night he gets someone to play with.
one night the security sees a light shining in the other side of the football pitch so the man decides to take a close look and then he sees a boy playing football on his own at the middle of the night.
then the starts talking to the kid and then they decide to play a penalty shoot out ,so the boy takes the first shot and then he score and then man takes a shot and he scores and then after a couple of shots the man takes the most shocking he has ever taken as the ball goes trough the boy and then man gets shocked and then he finds out the kid is a ghost and then an old man who is walking by sees the ball going through the kid (ghost ) . the man gets over the shock and before he says anything the kid disappears and the ball disappears with him as well.
a kid playing football at night on his own in a big empty pitch
2. EXT. FOOTBALL PITCH /. SIDELINES .
whilst the boy is playing football he gets spotted by a man and then the man watches on.
3.EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH .
the man walks toward the kid and the kid doesnt spot him and he carries on playing.
4. EXT. FOOTBALL PITCH.
the man approaches the kid and they start talking to each other.
5. EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH.
the man agree to play a penalty shootout .
6. EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH
the boy takes the first shot and he scores but the man misses and the ball goes through the kid.
7.EXT .FOOTBALL PITCH.
the man gets shocked before the man says anything the kid disappears.
A boy who died in a football pitch years ago come backs to play every night, so one night he comes back to play and do football skills,but this night he gets someone to play with.
one night the security sees a light shining in the other side of the football pitch so the man decides to take a close look and then he sees a boy playing football on his own at the middle of the night.
then the starts talking to the kid and then they decide to play a penalty shoot out ,so the boy takes the first shot and then he score and then man takes a shot and he scores and then after a couple of shots the man takes the most shocking he has ever taken as the ball goes trough the boy and then man gets shocked and then he finds out the kid is a ghost and then an old man who is walking by sees the ball going through the kid (ghost ) . the man gets over the shock and before he says anything the kid disappears and the ball disappears with him as well.
Friday, 21 October 2011
questionair
the documentary will about teenagers who have good talents like playing football but they have been wasted in the streets and they haven't been given a chance to prove themselves whilst other kids who are not as good them are playing in academies.
so in our documentary we will go to teenagers and ask them how old they are and we also film playing and they show us what they are capable of.
we will ask group of teenagers the following questions.
how old are you ?
do you play for any football teams
how long have you playing in these parks
do you ever get trouble from other who are not there to play ?
have you ever had a chance to prove yourself ?
are you still chasing your dreams to turn professional
have you given up?
so in our documentary we will go to teenagers and ask them how old they are and we also film playing and they show us what they are capable of.
we will ask group of teenagers the following questions.
how old are you ?
do you play for any football teams
how long have you playing in these parks
do you ever get trouble from other who are not there to play ?
have you ever had a chance to prove yourself ?
are you still chasing your dreams to turn professional
have you given up?
Tuesday, 18 October 2011
ancheromanscenes
road
car park
streets
barber shop
wall
streets
streets
news room
studio
bar
weather room
swimming
bar
studio
car park
streets
barber shop
wall
streets
streets
news room
studio
bar
weather room
swimming
bar
studio
Friday, 14 October 2011
proposal
auidience
the people who like football and people who care about the young community.
good things about making the video
the video will be reality and it will appeal to the audience who care about the young footballers who actually have talent. it will be easy to film because usually there are a lot of young people in parks playing football.
difficult thing
it might be a bit hard to find good talent
the people who like football and people who care about the young community.
good things about making the video
the video will be reality and it will appeal to the audience who care about the young footballers who actually have talent. it will be easy to film because usually there are a lot of young people in parks playing football.
difficult thing
it might be a bit hard to find good talent
main idea
has good talent been wasted??
there has been a lot of young talent wasted. in all the local parks there are great football players but one park in particular that has been above the rest and this park is Yardley in Coventry cv1 hilflields. this park is small but it has big talents so in my video i will be filming young people in local parks playing football. i will also talk about the increase of crime in the youth and also in Coventry and the effects of wasted talent has on the community.
there has been a lot of young talent wasted. in all the local parks there are great football players but one park in particular that has been above the rest and this park is Yardley in Coventry cv1 hilflields. this park is small but it has big talents so in my video i will be filming young people in local parks playing football. i will also talk about the increase of crime in the youth and also in Coventry and the effects of wasted talent has on the community.
Tuesday, 11 October 2011
treatment
A boy who died in a football pitch years ago come backs to play every night, so one night he comes back to play and do football skills,but this night he gets someone to play with.
one night the security sees a light shining in the other side of the football pitch so the man decides to take a close look and then he sees a boy playing football on his own at the middle of the night.
then the starts talking to the kid and then they decide to play a penalty shoot out ,so the boy takes the first shot and then he score and then man takes a shot and he scores and then after a couple of shots the man takes the most shocking he has ever taken as the ball goes trough the boy and then man gets shocked and then he finds out the kid is a ghost and then an old man who is walking by sees the ball going through the kid (ghost ) . the man gets over the shock and before he says anything the kid disappears and the ball disappears with him as well.
miracle fish scenes
the first scene is inside a car
second scene inside the class room
third scene the kid is siting in near a wall and gets bullied by
one night the security sees a light shining in the other side of the football pitch so the man decides to take a close look and then he sees a boy playing football on his own at the middle of the night.
then the starts talking to the kid and then they decide to play a penalty shoot out ,so the boy takes the first shot and then he score and then man takes a shot and he scores and then after a couple of shots the man takes the most shocking he has ever taken as the ball goes trough the boy and then man gets shocked and then he finds out the kid is a ghost and then an old man who is walking by sees the ball going through the kid (ghost ) . the man gets over the shock and before he says anything the kid disappears and the ball disappears with him as well.
miracle fish scenes
the first scene is inside a car
second scene inside the class room
third scene the kid is siting in near a wall and gets bullied by
Friday, 7 October 2011
Arsene Wenger says Arsenals start season terrible
Arsene Wenger's young guns are in big trouble.
Arsenal’s worst start for 58 years this bad run Wenger meant that arsene wenger is under pressure of from the fans and the managers job is under big pressure and there has been a lot of speculations this is what the manager had to say ‘Speculation is part of modern life,’ he said. ‘My future is focused on what I do well, that means giving my best for the club. I have no influence on the speculation.’ although the manager likes to defend his young team on their but he admitted that the teams performance wasn't good enough ‘Our performance today was terrible. Of course, we are very frustrated but the spirit in the team is quite willing. But at the moment if you look at the number of points we have given away, that’s not good enough.”
problems
arsenal's last game was against fierce rivals spurs and the result was embarrassing for arsenal as they lost 2-1 in a game which they should have won easily so why? are arsenal suddenly loosing and turning into a bad.
injuries
arsenal have been hit with a lot of injuries as they lost their first team right back sagna for 3 months in their last game, jack Whilshere is out for at least four months,varmalean the best center back for arsenal is out with a foot injury, and this means that Arsene Wenger will have less options in defense and this was the reason why arsenal have been conceding a lot of goals
no experience
arsenal have sent £31 million on new players but this do
transfers
late shopping buy the arsenal manager
suspensions
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